Saturday, December 4, 2010
Description of the captain
The captain was a young man about 23. He had short blonde hair, a clean shaven face, his ear was pierced with a metal bar. He had two different colored eyes, one was silver the other red. He had on black pants that weren’t that tight but weren’t louse either, he had on black combat boots, and a whit tee shirt under a bullet proof vest. He also had on 4 hand guns, 1 on each leg cowboy style and 1 under each arm in holsters that were sewn into his vest. 1 magnum in the small of his back. 1 mp5 on each leg right under his butt. 1 knife on each leg going from the ankle to his knee. A spaz 12 on the right side of his back and a 3ft scimitar on the left. His primary weapon was an UMP that was in his right hand. His chest was full of various magazines for his guns and he had another small bag that also had room in it for anything he may need. All of this was more or less concealed under a dark golden brown colored trench coat… He also looked rather strong.
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So he was a member of the mafia that happened to travel through time to obtain semi-modern weaponry?
ReplyDeleteHe has way to many weapons, you're going to have a hard time keeping track of all of them in the book. You should try concentrating it down to only a few.
For instance - he doesn't really need that many hand guns and there is no reason for the scimitar.
Also stop getting every single ounce of your inspiration from Call of Duty, you should try and come up with weapons yourself, be creative - it will be much better than an arguably direct copy.
the scimitar will be for later in the book(if it becomes a book) and i can get rid of a few guns i guess.
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